Poem: The Door Held Open, April 2023
- Erin Rehil
- Apr 12, 2023
- 1 min read
Updated: Aug 11, 2023
Along a mossy-quiet path—the memory
of water, jade-tinkling, carried within the soil—
on padded feet the apparition silently,
by guiding moonlight, came upon
a henge. A coil
of incense, partly burned, came into view beneath
a scholar’s stone. Closer now, other shapes began
to materialize, tall, pale, jutting like teeth;
porous taihu all, and each two meters in span.
Visible now within the central clearing stood
a monolithic nephrite pillar, smooth, apart
from a chest-height trapezoidal window that could
have been hurriedly chiseled out—a missing heart.
In this prominent position it seemed to hold
a function most ritualistic indeed, as of
an altar. To what dark domain,
what god of old,
would be consecrated the space hereinabove?
What off’rings placed upon its shelf? And why the green
gem? What dissolution pitting created this
rough-carved hole amongst these children of karst, unseen
but keenly felt, a monument to the abyss?
April 2023 Erin Rehil

Photo courtesy of the artist. Taken November 3, 2018, Nan Lian Gardens, Kowloon, Hong Kong.
"children of karst," I love that.